Based on comments and feedback from my mockup, as well as feedback from my front cover, I have made choices which influence the change from Mockup to First Draft. I have taken various pieces of advice into account and used them to help improve my work, overall making my products more appealing to my target audience (in theory).
This is my front cover, It was chosen when I raised the point that perhaps the guitarist should be in the foreground. This being said, the guitarist is now in the foreground, as this was chosen. Other issues were raised about the front cover as well - but I shall address these problems in my final draft - thankyou for your feedback.
For my inside cover, I didn't really have to change much, Because this tends to just contain artwork and nothing more, I decided to merely add band positions and who fills them - Guitars for Chad Hatcher, Rap Vocals for Classified etc. This was a necessary change, as my research has compelled me to follow conventions, and just a blank picture has only been found by me in a small portion of my owned albums.
This is my back cover, I took my time creating it, and made sure that it contained features that people liked, such as an actual character and recognisable environment, yet also personal to my style. In doing this, I created what I consider to be a good attempt, though this is always open to discussion, and the Final Draft will be improved based upon feedback.
This is my front cover, It was chosen when I raised the point that perhaps the guitarist should be in the foreground. This being said, the guitarist is now in the foreground, as this was chosen. Other issues were raised about the front cover as well - but I shall address these problems in my final draft - thankyou for your feedback.
For my inside cover, I didn't really have to change much, Because this tends to just contain artwork and nothing more, I decided to merely add band positions and who fills them - Guitars for Chad Hatcher, Rap Vocals for Classified etc. This was a necessary change, as my research has compelled me to follow conventions, and just a blank picture has only been found by me in a small portion of my owned albums.
This is my back cover, I took my time creating it, and made sure that it contained features that people liked, such as an actual character and recognisable environment, yet also personal to my style. In doing this, I created what I consider to be a good attempt, though this is always open to discussion, and the Final Draft will be improved based upon feedback.
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